tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34373582.post600310848432298800..comments2023-11-02T06:08:31.113-07:00Comments on Elephant seals negate the tactile universe: Adam Brown please remove the fat that has gathered around my abdomen because i'm hungry and wish to reuse that space for lemon-zingersOfeliahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08264688700590474975noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34373582.post-6667557991082999092008-01-11T15:41:00.000-08:002008-01-11T15:41:00.000-08:00This is lovely. I like it best when a poem has a ...This is lovely. I like it best when a poem has a big mix, and there is violence and compassion and images and current artifacts and all the things are touching the other things. When I finish reading this poem I cannot really communicate the effect the poem has had on me because it is a mix. That is why I like the mix, because it is more like an experience. My cat's just spilled the water and food dishes onto the floor and I went and cleaned it up. So I am sorry but I can only think about cats now, and I cannot think about poems anymore right now, just cats. When I went over to the dish Crowbar was on the counter looking down at Chiefrunningtears standing in the water. Thanks for the poem, Bye!Teddy Hanoverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11908844891367888846noreply@blogger.com